Daniel Love commented on Hagar and Ishmael in the Desert 2017-07-03 21:28:12 -0700Excellent job! Nice pacing, easy to follow, no difficult vocab. Good body language, facial expressions and small gestures – not at all distracting. You appear very comfortable without seeming too “rehearsed”, and I loved the relaxed quality of your voice. No critiques this time – you nailed it!